'sup guys and gals.
Can anyone fluent in Japanese proofread this short translation? The one I have is a little rough. If you wish to write a whole new translation, go right ahead too!
It's for a Famicom game called World Grand-Prix. It was released outside of Japan as Al Unser Jr. Turbo Racing, but all the story bits and copyright-infringing characters were removed.
Thanks in advance for the help!
ちじょう さいそくの バトルは、いま、おわりを
つげた。そして、やすらぎのときが、。。。！
The world fastest battle has just come
to an end. And so, peaceful time has... [started]
Player！ビッグなタイトルを、てにいれ
たな！おまえは、オレの、さいだいのライバルだ！
Player! You've obtained a big title!
You are the strongest rival for me!
Player よ！ つぎのシーズンは、このオレ
W.マーセルが、ワールドチャンピオンだ！
Hey Player! Next season, me
W. Marcel will be the one who becomes the world champion!
このグランプリ・シリーズ。もえた、もえたぜ！
This grand prix series. It's getting me all fired up!
Player！ ワールド・チャンピオン、
おめでとう。みごとなはしり、かんぱいだぜ！
Player! Congratulations on becoming the world champion.
You walloped me by the splendid run!
あ、あおびょうたんに、まけるとは、・・・
・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・
Uh-Unbelievable, that green hand defeats me...
M.セーナは、このままでは、おわらない！
Player！みていろ
M. Sena will not let it end like this!
Player! Watch out!
はげしいバトルを、たたかいぬいた、ともに、
カ・ン・パ・イ！
To the friend fought fierce battles together,
H E R E ' S T O Y O U !
Can anyone fluent in Japanese proofread this short translation? The one I have is a little rough. If you wish to write a whole new translation, go right ahead too!
It's for a Famicom game called World Grand-Prix. It was released outside of Japan as Al Unser Jr. Turbo Racing, but all the story bits and copyright-infringing characters were removed.
Thanks in advance for the help!
ちじょう さいそくの バトルは、いま、おわりを
つげた。そして、やすらぎのときが、。。。！
The world fastest battle has just come
to an end. And so, peaceful time has... [started]
Player！ビッグなタイトルを、てにいれ
たな！おまえは、オレの、さいだいのライバルだ！
Player! You've obtained a big title!
You are the strongest rival for me!
Player よ！ つぎのシーズンは、このオレ
W.マーセルが、ワールドチャンピオンだ！
Hey Player! Next season, me
W. Marcel will be the one who becomes the world champion!
このグランプリ・シリーズ。もえた、もえたぜ！
This grand prix series. It's getting me all fired up!
Player！ ワールド・チャンピオン、
おめでとう。みごとなはしり、かんぱいだぜ！
Player! Congratulations on becoming the world champion.
You walloped me by the splendid run!
あ、あおびょうたんに、まけるとは、・・・
・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・
Uh-Unbelievable, that green hand defeats me...
M.セーナは、このままでは、おわらない！
Player！みていろ
M. Sena will not let it end like this!
Player! Watch out!
はげしいバトルを、たたかいぬいた、ともに、
カ・ン・パ・イ！
To the friend fought fierce battles together,
H E R E ' S T O Y O U !
