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Poetry Slam.

Daikaiju

Rated Ages 6+
(He, Him)
My father was among many things, a poet.
As a small contribution to his memory, I thought we could use a thread for sharing the love of writing verse.
I've always had a tin ear for the stuff myself, but it's widely agreed among family and friends this is one of his best.

The Leaf Rider 8/5/85

(after the manner of the Eorlingas)

~
Where now are chopper and rider?
Cartridge belt gold gleaming,
Sunshower spray glistening,
A circlet of rainbow
Below the blades sweeping;
~
Out over the wire leaping,
Like leaves before the tempest reeling,
The greening blades of the paddies mirroring,
Bathed in the tropic heat, yet
In their ruffled blue fields shivering;
~
With the winds of war forward,
And childhood past remembering,
Is gone, as fast as the wind furrows
In the green-blue carpet
At first burst banished by bullets and blood.

Whither the windhover,
Above tangled green gliding,
The riders' glance sees not
The hurricane, the land
Their metal steeds' clacking racket

So on down to the great grass
To tree line on tree line
And always some never more
And some bodies for a time
While many minds and hearts hurt worse than

Yet new faces old places ever
Steady as the monsoon rain's
As regular as its
The long hot months into years
Till they all were
* * * * * * * * * *
So say men over a shot and beer
No knights in armor
Who once were lads in the summer
And did their job of
Someone else sometimes scathed becoming.

- Gerald Alan Ney
 

Daikaiju

Rated Ages 6+
(He, Him)
Well it's been a year since his passing. In an attempt to spark some life in this thread, here's another poem from my late father.

Watching Windmills in the Rain:
Vietnam Monsoon Movie Memories
- 11/21-22/2006



[Thanks to Jean Debelle Lamensdorf
for triggering the memories

of watching The Thomas Crown Affair

With it's main theme "The Windmills of Your Mind"

outdoors during a monsoon deluge

in Write Home For Me]


The main theme mingles with
The sibilant shurrsh from
The silvery pinpoints
Of earthrushing raindrops
Muting the images
And music of the night’s
Feature, a transparent
Ever falling curtain.
~
I watch the windmills
Internal; stroke, counter.
Crown and the lady fair
Matching motives and wits;
As I quiet my own
Constant comment clockwork,
Time out from work and war;
Warm and halfway dry
Under the poncho. Only
My eyes, nose and boots
Elementally exposed.

- Gerald A. Ney
 

Kirin

Summon for hire
(he/him)
I think I missed this the first time around and I really like that one from last year.
 

Teaspoon

(They)
I don't know if you wanted printed poetry, but I'm mourning and in need of poetry and this appears to be the right thread for that.

(warm and halfway dry under the poncho is such a cosy, comforting phrase)

*****

Why East Wind Chills

Why east wind chills and south wind cools
Shall not be known till windwell dries
And west's no longer drowned
In winds that bring the fruit and rind
Of many a hundred falls;
Why silk is soft and the stone wounds
The child shall question all his days,
Why night-time rain and the breast's blood
Both quench his thirst he'll have a black reply.

When cometh Jack Frost? the children ask.
Shall they clasp a comet in their fists?
Not till, from high and low, their dust
Sprinkles in children's eyes a long-last sleep
And dust is crowded with the children's ghosts,
Shall a white answer echo from the rooftops.

All things are known: the stars' advice
Calls some content to travel with the winds,
Though what the stars ask as they round
Time upon time the towers of the skies
Is heard but little till the stars go out.
I hear content, and 'Be content'
Ring like a handbell through the corridors,
And 'Know no answer,' and I know
No answer to the children's cry
Of echo's answer and the man of frost
And ghostly comets over the raised fists.

- Dylan Thomas
 
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