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Old 02-24-2017, 09:01 AM
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Looking forward to the next update.

Correction in the final panel: "...before I put in the final nail in..."
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Old 02-25-2017, 03:39 PM
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N-no this is REALLY good.

Maybe I don't know whats good?! You are insulting me!
Sorry! Not my intention! I'm glad to know that at least two actual human beings actually like what I'm doing!

I'm just a big perfectionist, and somehow the pages (and story) always end up looking the opposite of what I would like them to look like, and I find the whole thing very frustrating. (That's not going to stop me until I get to the end of the chapter, though.)

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Looking forward to the next update.

Correction in the final panel: "...before I put in the final nail in..."
Thanks! I will fix that when I post the next page. Which should be next Saturday.
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Old 03-04-2017, 03:03 PM
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Looking forward to the next update.

Correction in the final panel: "...before I put in the final nail in..."
Fun fact: There was a mistake in the French version in the exact same speech bubble. Both of them are now fixed.

In other news: Page 28 is up!

Page 29 should be up between March 12th and March 18th.

Also, good news! I was at a café last night with my notepad, working on the dialogues, and I finally reached that point:


(This is French for: "End of Episode 01". I usually write the dialogues in French first, and then translate them on the fly when I type them in the speech bubbles.)

So, in other words: I am four to five pages away from the end of this thing! Hurray!
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Old 03-12-2017, 08:28 PM
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Congrats on being in spitting distance of finishing the chapter! I'm excited to see where this goes, and I'll give it another read through once the final page is out.

I would recommend another correction on the final panel of page 28: "...did not think it appropriate..."
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Old 03-16-2017, 05:53 PM
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I would recommend another correction on the final panel of page 28: "...did not think it appropriate..."
Thanks! I fixed the page, and the change should now be online.

Also online: Page 29! It look amateurish as all hell, but at this point I kinda just want to get this thing over with. (Not a great sales pitch, I know!)

Next page should be up at some point next week.

In other news: I finished the thumbnails for the script last weekend, and there are 4 pages left in the first episode. The end is in sight!
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